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Yeah this some random sketch of some guy in a suit. I was to lazy to add the pin strips

yeah the body is way too big I need to know how to fix this. I wanna draw more sketchs with this guy
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Woahhhh
looking really good emran !!

it says advanced critique,
so i'll give it a try,

his shoulders are really well made,
though his posture seems a little stiff, and the part of his jacket that is flipping up, looks a tad bit flat, but you got the message across, so that's really good.
there's nothing wrong with his neck if you're going for a certain style,
at least in the thickness.above the scarf though, his neck his shifted a little bit to the right.


that shadow beneath the chin is nicely done.

you drew his profile view very nicely, i like it, except the very top of his head is flatish,
and slants diagonally to the back of the head.


i like how you drew the suit though.
trust me,
i can't draw suits/tuxes to save my own life.

he has an excellent character design
at first glance, he almost seems like a bodyguard or mob member
with his wide shoulders, and sharp nose.


if you really like, i can redline it, or at least try,
though someone with more knowledge from MT might be more useful x]

I like it a lot though.
you've improved a lot more than you know!!!